Topic+and+Thesis

Topic: The last year of the Trojan War.

Thesis: The Trojan War was fought for almost a decade, but only during the last year did the war start to lean in favor of the Greeks. In this final year the Greeks lost several of their heroes but the most mourned for was the the great warrior Achilles. During this last year, the Trojans obtained help from outside nations, and eventually Troy fell into the hands of the Greeks. ( Are these the two/ things you are going to develop in your paper? Your info page has a lot of info on it. Do you need some of it for your paragraphs on 1)Last year, 2) outside help? Is that your thesis i.e. what the rest of the paper is about? Also, I tired of doing spelling corrections and correcting awkward phrases. Please spell check and have someone read this before I get this back.

I have three different things i am going to talk about. 1)the death of Achilles 2)outside help 3)the fall of Troy Retype with this thesis as your last sentence. Figure out how to say it and then the rest of the paper should be about those three....

Thesis: The Trojan War was fought for almost a decade, but only during the last year did the war start to lean in favor of the Greeks. In the final year of the war the Greeks lost several of their heroes but the most grieved for was Achilles. Also in this last year the Trojans obtained help from outside nations, and eventually the great city of Troy fell.

Mrs. McK, I think i have to change what I'm writing about because all three of these things will make it more then 1050 words.

Thesis: The Trojan War was fought for almost a decade, but only during the last year did the war start to lean in favor of the Greeks. In the final year of the war the Greeks lost several of their heroes but the most grieved for was Achilles, but never the less the Greeks still took the city of Troy.